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Old September 6, 2007, 04:30 PM
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Cool My first poem i made when i was 8 years old
Well i made a poem 3 years ago when i was 8,its my first ever poem,here it is:

Moon Light
Moon light moon light
tonight you are very bright
please dont go away
you are bright you have a light
and you will never go away.

the end xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

well do you guys like it ?
i know that its a bit short but i was only 8 that time lol
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Old September 6, 2007, 04:34 PM
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lol not bad Dhrubo bruv!!! lol i can imagien u writing sum luv poems when ur older, gettin all the ladies!! get practisng bro!!
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Old September 6, 2007, 04:39 PM
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lol not bad Dhrubo bruv!!! lol i can imagien u writing sum luv poems when ur older, gettin all the ladies!! get practisng bro!!
haha okay lol.
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Old September 6, 2007, 04:41 PM
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gud poem Dhrubo
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Old September 6, 2007, 04:54 PM
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It's a very good poem from an eight year old kid.

You have got the ability, keep writing.
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Old September 6, 2007, 04:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Dhrubo
Well i made a poem 3 years ago when i was 8,its my first ever poem,here it is:

Moon Light
Moon light moon light
tonight you are very bright
please dont go away
you are bright you have a light
and you will never go away.

the end xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

well do you guys like it ?
i know that its a bit short but i was only 8 that time lol
Nice work Dhrubo... keep writing!!!
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Old September 6, 2007, 05:20 PM
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Tamim, Ash, and Mortaza lead our side
Hopefully one day we will become bonafide
One day in the future we will be great
But for now we face the same fate
We lose to teams like Lanka and Pak
But we will eventually fight back
Our fans are the greatest because we have to see regular losses in Test
But one day, one day we will be the best
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Old September 6, 2007, 05:22 PM
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thanks everyone for those great and kind comments,i really appreciate it,well i also have 3 stories i wrote when i was 8 aswell,but they are too long lol so maybe later.
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Old September 6, 2007, 05:24 PM
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Tamim, Ash, and Mortaza lead our side
Hopefully one day we will become bonafide
One day in the future we will be great
But for now we face the same fate
We lose to teams like Lanka and Pak
But we will eventually fight back
Our fans are the greatest because we have to see regular losses in Test
But one day, one day we will be the best
great poem ro bhaiya,even though this thread is about me lol just kidding.
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Old September 6, 2007, 07:11 PM
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dhrubo,

you have been given much encouragement in this thread. i wanted to be a little more serious, especially, if you wanted to take writing seriously.

writing is a craft and what it expresses, depending on the medium, can approach an artform. like all crafts, learning about it makes you a little better each day. once you have acquired the basics, you may break them creatively.

good writing needs no accolade. the very best is pairing it down to the very basics and reporting it exactly how it happened.
i don't wish to discourage you. however, i also don't want to raise your hopes to an unjustified level. if you are serious about writing then stop writing and start reading. read, read and read. read for the next dozen years. when you are 24, pick up the pen again.
best wishes,
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are you serious puck??
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joking..............
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Nice work Dhrubo.
You have got the talent, keep it up.
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Old September 7, 2007, 04:26 AM
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Nice poem ro1249
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Old September 7, 2007, 04:32 AM
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Originally Posted by Dhrubo
Well i made a poem 3 years ago when i was 8,its my first ever poem,here it is:

Moon Light
Moon light moon light
tonight you are very bright
please dont go away
you are bright you have a light
and you will never go away.

the end xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

well do you guys like it ?
i know that its a bit short but i was only 8 that time lol
woot woot!!! we have a genius!!!!
nice work dhrubo!!!
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Old September 7, 2007, 04:33 AM
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Tamim, Ash, and Mortaza lead our side
Hopefully one day we will become bonafide
One day in the future we will be great
But for now we face the same fate
We lose to teams like Lanka and Pak
But we will eventually fight back
Our fans are the greatest because we have to see regular losses in Test
But one day, one day we will be the best
niceeeeeeee
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Old September 7, 2007, 04:35 AM
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This was what I wrote when I was 8.

MonaLisar chokhey osru dekhey
Amar Ridoye jhor uthey...

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Old September 7, 2007, 05:04 AM
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Cute ... galtalo tipte tipte bhaurta hoye jachchhe ...
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Old September 7, 2007, 01:13 PM
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Good work Dhrubo, but why dont you try writing one now. We'll see how much youve improved
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Old September 7, 2007, 03:23 PM
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Good Work Dhrubo and ro1249!!!!
keep it upp
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Old September 7, 2007, 03:48 PM
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thanks Rajowana.
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Old September 7, 2007, 03:49 PM
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Good work Dhrubo, but why dont you try writing one now. We'll see how much youve improved
Yea BD, write a poem so we can see your improvement.
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Old September 7, 2007, 03:52 PM
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nice poem ro1249!! ur a poet- but didnt know it!!! got sum young budding poets here!! future Tagore and Nazrul??
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Old September 7, 2007, 04:48 PM
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dhrubo,

you have been given much encouragement in this thread. i wanted to be a little more serious, especially, if you wanted to take writing seriously.

writing is a craft and what it expresses, depending on the medium, can approach an artform. like all crafts, learning about it makes you a little better each day. once you have acquired the basics, you may break them creatively.

good writing needs no accolade. the very best is pairing it down to the very basics and reporting it exactly how it happened.
i don't wish to discourage you. however, i also don't want to raise your hopes to an unjustified level. if you are serious about writing then stop writing and start reading. read, read and read. read for the next dozen years. when you are 24, pick up the pen again.
best wishes,
puck
okay thanks puck bhaiya,i will keep that in mind.
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Old September 7, 2007, 04:48 PM
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Nice work Dhrubo.
You have got the talent, keep it up.
thanks sydney bhaiya,i appreciate your appreciation.
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Old September 7, 2007, 04:51 PM
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woot woot!!! we have a genius!!!!
nice work dhrubo!!!
thanks antora apu,your good comments are very good.
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Cute ... galtalo tipte tipte bhaurta hoye jachchhe ...
hahaha anyways thanks sohel nr bhaiya

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Good work Dhrubo, but why dont you try writing one now. We'll see how much youve improved
thanks farhad bhaiya,but i cant right one now its 1:00 in the midnight lol
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Good Work Dhrubo and ro1249!!!!
keep it upp
thanks rajowana apu,it means alot to me.
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